Happy Holidays!

Happy Holidays!

My book has been available for two weeks! It is so exciting to have people reading Wolf Healer. I’ve even been getting reviews. For those of you who reviewed the book, I send a heartfelt thank you. 

I have exciting news. The second book in the Jade Stone Chronicles will be out in April 2022 and pre-orders are available on Amazon. You can find a link on the website.

I hope you have a gentle holiday season and it ends up being everything you hoped it to be. 

Happy New Year!

Huckleberry

The Book Is Available!!

Today is the day! Can you believe it? I can’t! The book is live. If you have ordered it already, I am truly thankful and hope you enjoy it as much as I’ve enjoyed writing it. If not, it is never too late!

I hope you’re enjoying the day of palindrome 12-3-21 and the day of Wolf Healer!

Wolf Healer Live in Two Days!!

It is December, and you know what that means! Wolf Healer is coming out! It is the time of the wolf and time for you to meet Jade and crew! I hope you are as excited as I am. 

If you slide over to amazon, you can preorder the book, or on Friday, you can get the paperback!

Did you know you can now find me on goodreads?

GOODREADS!!!!

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I hope you are all celebrating with me, excited that the day is almost here! And, in 2022 I’m hoping to have at least one, if not two more books of the series out!

Book Cover Reveal!

Thank you all for joining my website! The cover is below, and the book is available on Amazon for pre-sales, the link is below!

Book Cover!!!

Pre-order the book: Amazon.com: Wolf Healer (The Jade Stone Chronicles Book 1) eBook : Rahr, Huckleberry: Kindle Store Amazon doesn’t allow for pre-orders of the paperback, it will be available on 12-3-21 when the book is officially launched for sales. If you aren’t the winner of the signed copy and still want one, I’ll be selling signed copies for $11 (cheaper than the Amazon price) in December. Email me and let me know if you’re interested.

Wolf and Prey…And a Healer

            “Mom! Why does Jade get the last bowl of chocolate Oh!s?”

            “Because I got up before you, bozo!”

            “Dufus!”

            I just smiled and ate my chocolatey goodness. It was the last of the sugar cereal, though, in reality, there hadn’t been much. Friday night had been a full moon run and Hope, José, T.J., and I had finished off the other cereals while watching Saturday morning cartoons. Owen always slept in and missed out on our fun.

            “Mooom, what am I supposed to eat?” Owen whined, slumping in his chair, his brown curls seeming to slump with him.

            For her part, my mom reached for her coffee, gazing into her cup as if there were something special in it. I wasn’t sure what she found in that mug, but she always was gazing into it when Owen and I fought…which happened often.

            “Owen, there are some frozen pancakes in the basement freezer. Jade, can you help him with the syrup?”

            Owen, who had run at the word pancake, stopped halfway down the steps and glared at me over his shoulder. “She’s six, I’m eight, I can do it myself.”

            Mom’s teacher brow rose, the one that meant business. “Can you do the butter too?”

            Owen froze, then stared at his feet, voice soft. “I could use help with that.” Then he slowly turned and finished making his way down to find the pancakes.

            Smiling to myself, I went into the kitchen and found the butter dish and brought it to the table with a knife and then returned to get the syrup. When Owen returned to the kitchen, he saw my preparations. “Do you want me to make you a couple too?”

            I just nodded.

            Happy we were finally getting along, Mom left to do her boring adult stuff. Finished with the cereal, I put my bowl in the dishwasher and waited. After Owen brought me the pancakes, I slathered them in butter and syrup. Once we each had a stack, we decided that eating in the basement with the TV on was a much better plan.           

            A few hours later a bunch of the pack kids came over to play while our parents did…stuff. They always seemed to need to talk. One of my best friends, Hope, hung out in my room to avoid her sister, Heather, who was only one. Her dad, Fred, was one of my favorite adults, besides my parents and my Aunt Allison and Uncle Jackson. Fred just “got” kids.

            Hope and I sat on the floor making Lego structures. She was a year older than me, but we got along great. Hope looked around my room. “Your parents are really going to let you paint your room? Please tell me you won’t choose pink.” As usual, she was wearing a pair of jeans and plaid button down. Her brown hair was cut short, and her blue eyes twinkled as she teased me.

            My lip curled into a sneer as I agreed with her assessment of the color. “Gods, no. I was thinking blue like the sky. Then I could get cloud and unicorn stickers. Maybe stars too.”

            Hopes brows furrowed. “Wait, would it be day or night?”

            “Does it really matter? Maybe the stars could glow.” Looking up at the ceiling, I smiled at the thought.

            The door swung open, and José and Owen crashed in. I glared at them. “What do you two want?”

            José flopped on the bed. “Hope’s sister is crying in the basement. We needed to get away.”

            “Owen has a room.”

            “And it stinks, chica. We need a place to be without screams or stinks.”

            Owen, who had flopped in my chair, laughed, spinning in the chair, hair flying. I’d seen my brother’s room. A shiver ran down my back; his room was just scary.

            Dillan came into my room, and I leapt up. “Aunt Allison is here!” I ran out, leaving all the boys to have my room as a hideout. Wait, Hope was there…well, close enough.

            Running down the hall, through the living room, into the kitchen, I found Aunt Allison sitting in the dining room with my uncle and parents, and Fred holding Hope’s baby sister with a bottle in her mouth. My aunt was drinking from a mug as I climbed into her lap to give her a hug.

            She put down her mug and squeezed me into a ball on her lap as she stared at my mom. “I hadn’t expected the tear on her leg, Hazel. You really need to find someone besides me to help on these calls.”

            “You know we trust you, Allison.”

            Curling tighter on her lap, I smiled over at my Uncle Jackson, who started making funny faces at me. Annie, his oldest daughter, roller her eyes at our play.

            Allison’s chest rumbled under me as she continued to talk to my mom. “If I hadn’t found the Yarrow plant, I don’t know that I would’ve gotten the blood to stop. He was out with his fiancé and she’s not a werewolf, she doesn’t heal like us. Her injury was serious.”

            Part of me followed their conversation, as always, but my play with my uncle was more fun. I twitched my nose like a cat at Uncle Jackson and he held up his hands and pretended to roar like a bigger cat and I giggled. In the background Aunt Allison described the plant to Mom.

            Mom’s voice became her teacher voice. “I may want you to hold a training session on these plants you know. It’s amazing you knew about that plant and its healing properties.”

            Aunt Allison pulled out her phone to show Mom a photo. As she pulled up the image, I watched what she was doing. I loved watching her work, she was the coolest adult in the pack. She always treated me like I was smart enough to understand. She talked to me and tried to explain things to me whenever I asked.

            With a shake of her head, Annie turned to my dad. “Will his fiancé be okay?”

            “Yes, hon, she’ll be fine. She’ll soon be the wife of our second, the wedding is scheduled next month. He’s new to the pack and just moved to Wisconsin. They decided to take a climbing trip up to Devil’s Lake and slipped while grabbing a hold on a climb. She fell part way down a cliff.”

            Annie paled but tried to look adult as she nodded. I curled in tighter to Aunt Allison. I couldn’t imagine falling from a cliff.

            After lunch we were all in the backyard playing. Fred came out. “Hope, love, Heather is getting fussy, it’s time to head home.”

            Hope and I were outside the treehouse watching the clouds telling each other stories of heroes. Owen, José, and Dillan were inside the treehouse playing cards. Ever since I learned the rules and started winning each round, they banned me from playing the game. I couldn’t help that they all had tells. They said Hope could join, but she stuck with me.

            Sitting up, she gave me a hug and a kiss on the cheek, then leapt down. Before they went into the house, Fred yelled, “José, do you want a ride home, too?”

            José stuck his head out and gazed at me with his dark penetrating eyes, then shifted his attention to Fred. Bobbing his head, he shrugged. “Yeah, that’d be good. Better than walking.” Following Hope’s example, he jumped.

            I saw Owen flop back. “Now what?”

            Dillan started packing up the cards. “Could we play wolves and prey?”

            Owen popped back up, blue eyes dancing. “Jade can be the prey. With her black hair she can hide the best anyway.”

            Huffing, my face dropped. “I’m always the prey.”

            “That’s because you’re so good at it, sis.”

            “No, it’s because I’m the youngest.” I sighed. “Let’s go tell mom. We can’t go into the woods without someone older.”

            Dillan nodded. “Annie could come. Isn’t eleven old enough?”

            We all scrambled down and headed inside.

            They told me I’d get a ten-minute head start. I was hoping for five-minutes because they never could wait. I ran. As the smallest and the slowest, I had to make the most of this time. The goal of the game was as complicated as it sounded. I was the prey; they were the pack of wolves. None of us were really wolves yet. We wouldn’t know until we were old if we’d become a wolf…like really old…like eighteen or nineteen. Maybe not even until twenty.

            The pack of “wolves” let me out to hide, and then they’d come and find me. Though my family had a huge forest in the back yard, we limited the area I would run and hide. Small and clutzy, I knew my limitations. Sometimes I wish I could leap up into the trees like a cat or fly like a bird.

            I was jumping over tree roots and ducking under branches when I heard my brother yelp somewhere behind me. This prank of his wasn’t unheard of. He often tried to trick me into thinking he was hurt so he could catch me when I came back to help. I ducked behind a tree to wait and listen.

“It hurts! I’m not joking! Come on, guys!”

           This sounded real. But as my big brother, he knew how to fool me. Last week when we played this game, he had done something similar, and I had fallen for it. I had to learn these lessons. Not to mention, he had his “pack” where were Dillan and Annie?

           Trying to quiet my panting, I listened more carefully. Was he whimpering? Should I investigate?

           Holding my breath, I peeked around the tree. Seeing nothing suspicious, I let out my breath and slunk towards him. I tried to be quiet, but he was making so much noise I didn’t have to try very hard. Was this an ambush? My head whipped around looking for my cousins.

           After my cautious approach, I found Owen lying on the ground, clutching his leg, crying. The pain must have been bad. He was eight, a big boy, and never cried.

           Owen hiccupped. “Jade, do something. It hurts.” He sniffled and wiped his nose on his sleeve. He was lying in a pile of leaves and twigs and didn’t even seem to notice the branch poking his side.

           When I got to him, he seemed to calm down a bit. He still writhed on the ground, but his breathing slowed. His focus snapped to me as I touched him. He was obviously still in a lot of pain. His eyes glistened with tears and his was biting his lower lip. Carefully, I straightened his leg and saw exactly how bruised and bloody he was.

           What a mess. I didn’t think the bone was cracked, but he had obviously scraped his leg on some of the rocks and pebbles. I gently rubbed down his leg. He moaned in pain. Nodding, I thought it may be a small fracture at worst. Listening to Aunt Allison any chance I got had taught me a lot. I also watched her work whenever she had a pack member in the pack medical room.

           The blood made me cringe. I sent my eyes up to the sun and thought of Sonnara, the sun god. Give me guidance and strength. I didn’t know if it would help, but that’s what Mom always did.

           Organizing my thoughts, I wasn’t sure Owen could walk home on his own.

           Biting my lip, I tried to think of what to do first. I remembered what Aunt Allison had told my mom about using a plant earlier. It had a name like a crying cat… Cry? Yowl? Yarrow. That was it! I closed my eyes and thought about their discussion. Uncle Jackson had made a face like a panther…and…that’s it, I could remember the description Aunt Allison gave of the plant after Mom asked her. Then I thought about the phone and that image she showed Mom. Bingo!

           I searched around for the small, white-flowered plant. It didn’t take very long. When I found it, I stripped the leaves from the stem and covered Owen’s leg with them. As I worked, I focused on him. He finally stopped wiggling, allowing me to really work on his leg and the injury. I asked him for his shirt. He took it off and I wrapped his leg with it to hold the leaves against his skin.

           My hands were shaking, but Owen needed his leg healed.

           It was then I remembered we weren’t alone in the woods. “Annie, Dillan, Owen’s really bad off! We need your help! Where are you?”

           Turning, I realized they were standing behind me watching. They had watched me fix up Owen. Their eyes were wide, and their hands were shaking. They must be nervous…unsure how to help.

           I set my jaw in determination. We had to get Owen home. “Dillan, grab two sturdy branches, at least a foot long each. Annie, I’m going to need your belt.”

           Dillan came back with a stick longer than Owen was tall. Grumbling, I rolled my eyes.

           “Dillan. It has to fit his leg.” I heard the exasperation in my voice.

           He walked off and I heard some snapping. When he came back with the pieces, I lined them up on either side of Owen’s lower leg to make a splint, then got everything secured with Annie’s and my belts.

           “Annie, do you think this is tight enough?” She checked the belts and the sticks. She tightened the lower belt.

           “There you go, squirt. But he’ll still need help walking. Dillan take the other side, Jade’s too small.”

           I bristled at her words, but knew she was correct. After a few minutes of walking, Dillan got tired, and I took over. We switched out, taking turns with the squirming and panting Owen.

           The three of us did our best to support Owen home. When we got there, Dillan was under Owen’s arm, so I ran in to find my mom.

           “Come quick, Owen’s leg…he got hurt.” That was all I got out before a stampede of adults were running out to find him. I don’t think they expected him to be right there in the back yard.

           Before I even turned around, Dad was carrying Owen into the medical room. I followed.

           Aunt Allison looked over his leg. “Annie dear, who did this?”

           Annie’s eyes grew wide as saucers. Her gaze shifted from Owen to Aunt Allison to me. “It was Jade. The bandage was done by the time me and Dillan got there. Then she told us what to do for the splint.”

           All the adults looked at me and my shoulders hunched as I bit my lower lip. I wasn’t sure what I’d done wrong, but there were a lot of eyes on me all of a sudden. Then Aunt Allison knelt in front of me. “Jade, love, tell me about what happened.”

           For a minute, my mind went blank, then I searched the faces and gulped. Before I could decide how much trouble I was in, and figure out why I was in trouble, Aunt Allison said, “Just look at me, love, talk to me. Tell me about the game and what happened.”

           Staring at just her, I took a breath and started talking. When I got done, Owen and Annie both made sounds of agreement.

           Dad came over. “But pumpkin, how did you know about that plant?”

           “From today, Aunt Allison was talking about it.” Wait! Am I not in trouble?

           Aunt Allison eyes shone. “Jade, you have the gift.”

           Everyone in the room froze, then a sense of pride burst in my chest as I was engulfed in hugs.

           From then on, whenever there was a need for anything medical, I was called in to travel with whomever was going out, to help and to learn.

           I was to become the next werewolf pack healer.

Family

First Run

“Are you sure you’re really ready for this?”

Pebble

Sitting at the table and eating breakfast, I watched as Dad walked in. I knew today was going to be a big day. There was a buzz in the air, a certain vibration I couldn’t explain. Most people didn’t feel the air-current telling them how things would go, but I had since I was five.

“Today is the day, I’m sure.”

He narrowed his eyes. “Like, you know know?”

“I know know.”

He grabbed some coffee and put a bagel in the toaster. “Was this a premonition?”

“No, just a feeling about today being a special day.”

He shook his head, then ruffled my hair. “Pebble, you’re a wonder.”

After eating our fill, we headed out to the backyard. For my change, I ducked behind a divider. Still a bit shy about getting naked before shifting, no one in the pack made me feel uncomfortable when I hid while I found my wolf. Being a werewolf had been my life for six years, ever since I had been attacked when I was five years old. I didn’t even remember the before-time, or my birth parents. 

All I could remember from before being adopted into the Stone family was the car ride, a man causing the car to stop, screaming, and me left on the side of the road. When I went back to the car, my parents were dead. I know I had already been bitten and turned by then because I remember my parent’s glee at having a cute baby wolf before we’d driven off from…gah, I couldn’t remember. 

They had done something and wanted to run to…somewhere. It was all hazy. There were snatches of cars, woods, and then the horrid foster care man who threw me in a cage. Then I met Jade and her family, and they adopted me. Saved me.

When I was little, I had been afraid of being a wolf, but now I was as much wolf as I was human. Being turned so young meant I had traits the others didn’t, like some of a wolf’s premonitions. 

My shifts to wolf were getting faster, but not less painful. Bones rearranged themselves, my face elongated, hair retreated, and coarser hair grew. The sounds made me whimper. Gods, the pain. When it was over I sat for a few seconds until the memory of the agony dissipated. I trotted around the corner to find my dad, in wolf form.

For the last six years I had refused to hunt. My wolf craved the hunt, but the girl I had been was afraid of killing the cute, furry animals. Well, today I was going to cross that bridge and become a real werewolf. 

Dad rubbed noses with me, a question of readiness. Rubbing back, we were off. We ran into the forest, sniffing. Searching the area, there was a family of birds flying above, one was young…was it learning to fly? As I continued through the woods there was a dead bird. When I sniffed it, Dad knocked it away. We didn’t eat that which we didn’t kill, not unless we were desperate. But that wasn’t what had bothered me about the bird on the ground…it looked like it had fallen from the sky. 

We quickly found a rabbit-trail and followed it. When we found the rabbit, I watched as Dad demonstrated how to stalk, attack, and take down the prey. 

My stomach turned a bit at the reality of what was happening, but I signaled my readiness. Dad came over and nudged me towards the carcass. Years of fear had me digging in my paws and shutting my eyes, then I shook, relinquishing my baby self. Slowly approaching, I lowered my snout and sniffed. The human recoiled but the wolf rejoiced. Trying to box away the human side, I opened my jaws and took a bite of the warm rabbit meat. Both amazed that it tasted good, and a bit revolted that I enjoyed it, I took a second bite. 

We continued into the forest. There were more trails. Dad nudged me down one, and then he sat on his haunches. The message was clear: Lesson done, it was time for me to apply it. Slowly and silently, I stalked down the trail, taking in all the scents. After six years, or a lifetime, of being a werewolf, moving in this form felt natural. Seeing a hole where the rabbit must live, I moved in, sniffing out the area. 

The wind shifted, bringing a new scent. Coyote. I froze, whipping around to retreat. My path was blocked. There wasn’t just one coyote, there was a whole family of them. I howled and they attacked. I fought. Dad had been training every wolf in his pack how to fight for years, and I wasn’t an exception.

Coming in low and lunging up, I tore out the throat of the first coyote. I heard his gurgle as the light left his amber eyes. A second coyote sank its teeth into my back leg and yanked, while a third dove for my belly. I rolled and the fiend missed my stomach but I couldn’t dislodge the one on my leg. As I moved, I kicked and bit, attacking anything I could, but there were three attackers, and I was small. 

There was a sound like a twig snapping, and then a searing pain radiated up from my leg, my left arm. There was a crashing noise. More coyotes? I fought harder. I bit into the stomach of the closest one, and as it bucked back from me I saw Dad tear out its throat, a fountain of blood showering the field. 

Snapping jaws flashed towards my throat, but I did a move my brother Owen taught me and twisted sharply to my left, rotated as a searing pain shot down my body, and lunged for his throat…her throat. Gods, I had to focus on survival. Bite, rip, blood, survive.

Collapsing, I couldn’t move anymore. Why couldn’t I move? 

Dad’s muzzle nudged mine. He sniffed my body, ruffling my fur gently. After a few minutes of grunts and the sounds of bones breaking and adjusting, he was kneeling next to me in human form. “Gods, Pebble, stay with me.”

Everything had gone dark. Was it night? No, my eyes were closed. I rolled my head toward him and opened my eyes. He let out a cry and carefully lifted me up, holding me securely to his chest. He loped back to the house, and barreled into the kitchen, gently placing me on the floor. “Sarah! Sarah! Get in here! Hazel!”

Both of them came. Sarah took one look at me and her eyes glazed with distance. After a minute, she shook her head. “I can’t get a hold of Jade, but I don’t care, I’m going to do it anyway.”

Hazel, Mom gazed back and forth between us. “It’s early in California, two hours behind us. Gods, I hope she’s asleep. Healing her with Jade’s ability will knock her out, but…she’d want this. I know my daughter.”

Sarah knelt beside me and held out her hands. She was my sister’s alpha and could tap into my sister’s healing ability. If this worked, I would survive. My sister would be knocked out for the day. Healing from a distance took all of her energy. Sarah was the only person who could do this Soul Sharing. Thank goodness she was here. 

A warm heat flowed through my body and I closed my eyes. Bones came together and muscles knitted. I could breathe again without pain. After a few minutes, Sarah slumped and I knew my premonition was coming to pass, and it wasn’t a good one. 

Bevin’s Spring Break

“Bevin, are you ready for the meeting?”

That was an excellent question. Was I? I sat on my bed staring at all the clothes strewn around my floor. Mostly flannels, but a few gay pride shirts as well. I could feel my heart pounding in my chest as I gripped the side of my bed. The meeting started soon. I wanted this. It was just information. Why was I nervous?

José made his way across the room and sat down next to me. He gently placed his arm across my shoulder, and I closed my eyes, trying to take the comfort he offered. He was one of my best friends. I leaned into him, dropping my chin to my chest. “Why am I scared?” My voice came out so softly, I didn’t think he’d hear me.

His head came down on my shoulder as he squeezed me in a half hug. “I know, it’s something you’ve always wanted, but it’s also surgery. Something huge. Let’s go, jump in. It’ll be great. Afterwards I’ll get you ice cream.”

I couldn’t help but laugh at his incentive. “I’m not Jade.”

He pulled me up. “So, no on ice cream?”

“Too late, it’s been offered.”

Once standing, José stared up at me, his dark eyes giving me comfort. Ever since I could remember, he’d been a rock in my life. We’d grown up together, but we’d only really become close when I’d entered high school. He introduced me to the GSA, gay, straight, alliance. He’d always supported me, though I think he never quite understood me. He got gay, he was working on trans. Despite that, he always supported me.

We headed out to the driveway. I smirked at him. “I’ll drive.”

“Sweetheart, you know I love you, but no, I want to survive today, I’ll drive.”

I didn’t know why none of my friends thought I could drive, it irked me, but, whatever. On the way to the meeting I got a text from Jade, who was in Florida with Sarah. I snorted. “They’re camping. They’re with that British family, hope they have fun.”

We got to the meeting. It was at a local Youth Outreach Center. I stared at the door and froze.

José grabbed my hand. “You’ve got this, Bev. It will be great.”

Slowly, I got out of the car and we headed in. The gatekeeper, the person at the desk was a young man with a nametag Joe (he/him). He pointed us in the right direction. There was a small room with a circle of chairs. A few were empty so we took two. At eleven the meeting started.

For the next hour the group of six transgender people spoke about their fears of surgery. Two had been through it, four of us hadn’t. They asked that José not remain, as he wasn’t transgender, and José agreed to go and wait by Joe. I was amazed at the information given and the freedom they felt in giving their stories. They agreed to set up another meeting in the summer, and we shared online contacts.

Oh my gods…this was all so real! This really could happen!

José took me out for ice cream. We each got a sundae and I told him about my fears. “I just want the surgery over with, but I still have over two years to wait. I don’t turn eighteen until next year, May eighth.”

José grabbed my hand. “You know, that’s barely a year and a half more. You’ve got this and we’re all here for you.”

Relaxing, we finished our dessert before he brought me home.

The next morning, I woke up with a series of texts from Jade. She’d been attacked and was in the emergency room. What the hell? I always though it was Owen who caused the family to end up there.

Book’s Done, Now What?

The first time I got to this point, I was shocked. I wasn’t sure what I had accomplished. I sent my document to a friend, and she informed me that, once it was published, she’d put the book in her library. What?! 

I want to begin by saying I am not an expert. I don’t know if that there are experts out there. Maybe there are, but I’ve gotten so much advice and some of it is so different, I’m not sure. We are talking about people, and everyone is different. 

I was dumbfounded. I started Googling. The first site I found said: now that you’re done and excited, start your second book. The implication was, it was all downhill from there. I did start my second book, if you’re wondering…

I was at the start of the editing phase. If you’ve followed all my advice, you’ve already gone through alpha readers, critique partners, beta readers, and an editor. You are way ahead of where I was then. So I’ll fast forward in my story. About a year and a half later.

My book has been edited…twice. A good editor will do this. 

Next, publication. I wanted (and still want) a traditional publisher. If you’ve read my book you may know how my book was published whereas I, sitting here writing this today, have no idea. I am still in that hazy unknown place that I’ll be writing about in this post. This may be where you are, the unknown point of how I get my work published. If my book is published and you’ve read it: Hi Future! From the past! Hope things are well!

If you want to publish traditionally, you will still need to do a lot of the marketing yourself. Read that last sentence again. It threw me when I first learned that fact. You may want to go and create your own website, instagram, twitter account, tiktok, or whatever the latest in social media is to catch people’s attention. I’ve always hesitated in mentioning the specifics, but I did here since three of the four I’ve mentioned are ones I have. 

Some publishers will accept your work, your manuscript, directly. That isn’t common. I wouldn’t expect it. The ones I did find said that if you sent them your manuscript, only query with them, and give them three months to get back to you. That means, you are in limbo for three months and are agreeing not to show your work to any other publisher or literary agent. 

Most writers look for literary agents. There are people who have relationships with publishers. There are hundreds, probably thousands of literary agents and companies out there. Each one is a bit different in how you approach them and what they want.

Query Letter: This is the most basic request. There are many websites which will tell you how to put together a query letter. Most agree that it should be short, with a limit of 300-350 words. Start with a greeting, thank them for reading your letter. Don’t hide your twist. If the literary agent is reading 100 of these letters in a day, you want to capture their interest right away. What makes your story better then the next author’s? Include your title, word count, and if the work is completed. You should add something about yourself. I noted that I am a math teacher, and why I thought it was appropriate for me to write about the LGBTQ community. 

Synopsis: A Synopsis is similar to a police report of your story. It is a dry reporting of the story from beginning to end. Just the facts, ma’am, just the facts. You should bold the characters names (with the age in parenthesis). It should end up being about 500-800 words. 

The synopsis should give everything away about the story. Don’t hold back. The person reading the synopsis should know all of the spoilers by the end and have a good feel for your story.

Pitch: The pitch should be a single sentence that introduces your main character, your story’s title, your genre, and a brief introduction to what you wrote. 

Bio: Here they want to know something about you. If you have any background in writing and English, all the better. 

The last thing that is often asked for is comparable books to yours. Knowing a list of books that are similar is great. If you don’t have any, then you may need to just say that. 

Once you have all the pieces collected, written, checked over, you are ready to start. Just know that this part of the journey is long. Everyone gets a long collection of rejections. Everyone rewrites the query letter. It is all part of the process.

Start finding literary agents. They have websites. You can find listings in different collections as well. Then you read over what each agent is looking for and find one who would be interested in your genre. Figure out how they want to be queried, and go for it.

I kept a spreadsheet. This way I only queried each agency once. Most don’t like being queried multiple times, even after your rejection. Some say it is okay; if that is the case, then go for it. Some have one person read the queries and give the submission to the most likely agent. You really don’t want to upset the agencies. I’ve heard you should query anywhere from 25 – 100 agents. I don’t know the correct number. 

Good luck on this part of traditional publishing. It is the hazing that most writers who publish traditionally go through.

Cheers!

I Was Asked to Edit?

Once you join a writers’ community, you quickly learn it’s like a village. You can get a lot of help, but only if you are willing to provide help too. 

But Huckleberry, what do I know about editing? I can barely get my cool ideas down on paper in a coherent way! If it weren’t for my friends Angela and Wes I’d look a COMPLETE fool!

Trust me, this is how I felt too. There is a term for this: imposter syndrome. I didn’t believe I had the credentials to tell people with an English degree that their writing needed work. I am a dyslexic with a mathematical background. Who am I to tell them their writing isn’t perfect? 

This took me a while. I’ve always been an avid reader. I knew when a story was missing pieces, or there were loose ends that needed wrapping up. My confidence grew in messenger and text messages. Sitting down and discussing their work with the writer was scary at first, but more times than not it resulted in their appreciation. 

In the end, all writers want to share a good story. We have this world in our head, and we sometimes don’t communicate it as well as we wish. Having a reader tell us that something doesn’t make sense just lets us know we need to fill in those missing pieces. It’s better to be told early on in the process when the fixes are possible than finding out at the end. 

When a friend or a critique partner asks for you to read their writing, just be honest with them. Comment on things that don’t make sense, such as missing plot points. Let them know when you want more: more emotion, more detail. I usually miss out on that last one in my initial draft. My critique partners ask me to add more detail all the time. In contrast, I tell them to pull back on detail because they can go on forever.

Let your partner know if they’ve “told” you something that they could “show” instead by using character actions or other cues like dialogue. Often showing is more interesting and engaging, there is an example below. It pulls the reader in. Also, look for repeated words. I have had several words I’ve caught myself over using. I won’t let you know, or you’ll look for them in my writing, and I don’t need that pressure!

You aren’t there just to smooth out the pokey parts, either. Let the writer know if what you read made you laugh or smile. If what they wrote was good. Everyone wants to know what they did well. 

In the end, you’re there to partner up and share in the ride. The goal is to grow the good, and help smooth out the rough spots every writer has. 

Telling: I sat in the tree, afraid of what would happen next.

Showing: Sitting in the tree, my heart began to beat, I could barely breath around the lump forming in the back of my throat, my mind had gone blank. What had Dad told me to do when I was attacked? Where had everyone gone? Could I do this alone?